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Annette Kimmel
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0 posted 2002-08-10 12:36 PM



Visions Of God , My Choice To Choose
                             A.J.Kimmel
Hell itself You opened wide,visions given my dreams
Three night fold,unspeakable terror,a bedlam of bawling screams.
Pathetic souls tempest tossed, descended hopeless death
Never dead, perpetually dying,pleading final breath.

Every nerve the Devil's string,hosting unutterable lament
Flying demons,tearing flesh, repetitious events.
Liquefied burning furnaces,encrusting horrendous pain
red hot coals, unbelievable heat, dust filled clouds of rain.

Utler darkness, it's blackened hole,
it's rivers of souls beneath;Hateful fiends,miserable scamps,ripping flesh the weak.
Cannibalistic gnawing teeth,cutting flesh the meat
Venomous Atler's razors grip,limb to limb the feet.

The Devil's den,gravel pits,unholy terror his throne
Bedlam of havoc,demonic games,accursed the un atone
Anguished victims,delirium, effaced the face of God
Hell's Abyss their blackened hole
It was they who played the card.

Tormented bowls cauterized flesh,sweating drops of blood  
Fiery furnaces endlessly scorched, Santan's demonic scrub.
No light,no night, addling souls,no sun the light of day
Mercifully pleading final closure,no rest the bed they made.

Convulsive spasms, eyes ripped out, ruptured limb to limb
Wishing death,souls never dying,continual axis spin
You knew me before I knew you Lord
Take me as you will.

Make me worth Your blood stained hands
Will my heart be still.
Cleanse my soul it's imperfections,wash my sins away
Make me an instrument of Your peace,give me hope I pray.

You knew me before I knew You Lord  
Thank You for my dreams
Visions  to let me see the truth
Consequences Satan's plain
Thank Jesus, I praise Your name,
I'm bound for Heaven's Train!
                



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1 posted 2002-08-10 12:56 PM




Wow!!! Oh my gosh, this is sooooo powerfully angst-driven in the beginning but then leads to salvation and hope in the end, sweet friend, yes, the choice is ours and only by understanding the consequences do we turn to Him and look up for all thats good and finally, embrace His love and guiding light! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful and powerfully descriptive in its language and emotion, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Annette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-10 08:33 AM


AnnetteMyFriend~
Welcome to the posting side of Passions !
You will find many Warriors for Christ here~

This is a lovely outpouring to share with us~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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