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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-08-09 09:04 PM



Fair Walking

~*Marge Tindal*~

I have come fair walking
across this day of gifted adorn
Caught the sun in rising
on early rays of morn~

Took pause to hear a Sparrow
sing his morning song
Watched in sweet contentment
at butterflies upon the lawn~

Saw a rainbow kiss the sky
after an August rain
Lifted my voice in thankfulness
for His promise I see again~

I have come fair walking
into the twi-of-night display
Thanking The Maker of my understanding
for gifting me this day~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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1 posted 2002-08-09 10:07 PM


Another beautiful masterpiece from the pen in your hand.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-08-09 11:15 PM


Wonderful thoughts here Marge.
I so enjoyed this tonight.
~Hugs~

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3 posted 2002-08-09 11:35 PM


Marge:  I love the wording of this one.  Also the thought behind it.  I always take a few moments when I get up at 5:00 a.m with Ron, to step outside and enjoy that wonderful time, with thanks to He who gave it.

Betty Lou Hebert

Annette Kimmel
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4 posted 2002-08-09 11:54 PM


Beautiful poem Marge.You are one talented poet! God Bless You and thanks for sharing
Christ Warrior Annette

Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2002-08-10 01:54 AM


Your work is so inspiring and lovely.  Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (08-10-2002 01:55 AM).]

Dennis L. White
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6 posted 2002-08-10 11:08 AM


And what a sweet gift it is, how eloquently you have captured some of the beauties our Maker provides for us. To GOD be the Glory.
Beautiful verse Marge........Dennis


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



ethome
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7 posted 2002-08-14 06:03 AM


Marge
I think more people should take time to think this way.......Excellent work!

miriam
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8 posted 2002-08-14 04:36 PM


very nice!

miriam coronado



Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2002-08-25 03:21 PM


Friends~
I thank each of you for your comments of enjoyment and encouragement on this piece from my heart~

Been a little under-the-weather and apologize for not having gotten back to it sooner~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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