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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-08-05 06:27 PM



Once the rose dripped
crimson into my dawn
tiny drops of life
to wet the lawn.
An illusion? perhaps
but I think the rose weeps
for a world that appears
to be gone to sleep.
For even the rocks
and the trees would cry out
even the birds
and the bees would give shout,
were we not to worship
at the feet of the King
all of nature would rejoice
all of His praises they'd sing.
So I think the rose weeps
for the souls of man
knowing salvation
would bridge the span
between all of God's children
and the Lord up above
I think the rose weeps
it weeps in love.


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1 posted 2002-08-05 07:49 PM




(big huggsssssss) Oh Anne, this is soooooo beautifully touching and hopeful, sweet friend, my heart too weeps to all the hearts of man and I hope soon the rose of loves nectar can fill and make amends and bring harmony to everyone of the world! (sigh) God Bless You sweet friend, this is beautifully inspirational, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2002-08-06 04:00 PM


Very visual personification of what I interpret to be the Rose of Sharon who weeps over creation with groanings and intercessions.  I also find in your poem the scripture being paraphrased that says if we fail to worship the Lord... still the rocks will cry out in worship to the Lord in our place.  I love how you combine nature and scripture in your poetry.  Very nicely done.  -Bob
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