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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-07-26 11:47 PM


Life is a Research Paper

Vivian So aka. Eliza Simmons
(c)July 26, 2002

Life is a research paper,
We keep renew our thesis,
Searching... for direction
On this paper of map.

Times... when we don't
Know our paper structure.
Times... when we aren't sure
Of our hypothesis.
Sometimes... we just don't know
What we are writing...
All in a confusion...
We all... go through... trials and errors...
To find... our conclusions.
Sometimes... we are... too early to conclude.
Times... we have to rewrite our paper again.
But sometimes... there's no turning back...
Like our ink copy of our work.

Life is a research paper,
We keep renew our thesis,
Searching... for direction
On this paper of map.

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-07-27 02:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Eliza, this is so very true, sweet friend, yes, we continue to learn from our mustakes and if we are stuck on any level of mneaning or parenthetical documentation, He is willing to be our mentor every step of the way! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

paladin
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2 posted 2002-07-27 06:23 PM


And like a reseach paper we are always re-writting our lives.

paladin

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2002-07-28 11:31 PM


very well thought out and presented.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2002-08-16 03:34 PM


I think that your poem is a very good written analysis indeed...  Always deeper realms of imagination and creativity that remains out there for our discovery.  The depth of our Lives and living them to their fullest is truly endless.  Good job.  -Bob
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