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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2002-07-02 08:13 AM



The earth is dry
Many are falling
Lost in the sand
Thirsty beyond measure
Empty souls search for pleasure
Seeking gratifying drink
The hollow mind stinks
In desperation
Hearts reach for heaven
Out of the blue
Love washes in truth
As HIS river of love
Covers
The world trembles


BloomingRose


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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2002-07-02 04:50 PM


Deb,

Very strong descriptions
of a very dry and thirsty land.
I know, for one, that I've been there a few times.
It's a refreshing thought to know that GOD
still replenishes our souls with His
Living waters today.
Yes, I thank GOD for that river of Love
that you've mentioned in your poem
that causes the world to tremble.

Again, very well written verse and GOD bless you.

-Bob

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2002-07-02 08:44 PM


There is only one drink that can quench the thirsty earth.  And you have named Him.  Joyce
Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-07-02 09:05 PM


Wonderful write Debra.
~Hugs~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-03 04:14 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, yes, His mighty river will always purify us all and His love is so powerful it will tremble in all our hearts softly with strength and courage to continue on! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22
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5 posted 2002-07-04 05:19 PM


Wow Deb, this is a powerful spiritual insight, I especially enjoyed this:
quote:
Empty souls search for pleasure
Seeking gratifying drink
The hollow mind stinks
In desperation

It describes so well the state of a soul empty of the word and well of God, but praise be to the Lord, when the River of Christ flows to earth, it can tremble in relief! Beautifully done! God Bless!

tracie66
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Australia
6 posted 2002-07-06 06:39 AM


Hi blooming rose~
What a write, well penned indeed!
~hugs~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2002-07-06 04:38 PM


Your words not only inspire, but they always speak from the heart and carry a message that we all need to know and embrace.  Beautiful writing and God bless you always.
BloomingRose
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8 posted 2002-07-09 10:46 AM


God Bless You All

Deb

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