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Trillium
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0 posted 2002-05-12 04:24 PM






Watching Clouds

In clouds I see so many things.
Each mass that passes always brings
A fascinating panoply
Of people, objects, mystery!
Sometimes I think that I can see
Sweet angels, resting regally
Upon a white and puffy pouf
That's floating high above my roof.

I've endless interest in the shapes
That clouds attain.When evening drapes
Dark curtains over everything,
I watch for moonlit nights to bring
Cloud banks illumined from behind.
They are spectacular I find.
It matters not if day or night,
I watch for clouds to come in sight
And follow them across the skies,
Until they're hidden from my sight.


Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2002-05-12 07:25 PM




(smiles) Oh Betty, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I always find cloud watching to be such a wonderful thing, for when I look up upon the heavens above I always wonder how existence is filled with so many endless wonders we have yet to decipher and how only God knows the secrets to them! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely fabulous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-05-12 09:46 PM


This is very imaginative and pretty Betty.  Joyce
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3 posted 2002-05-13 08:30 AM


Oh what beautiful imagery this poem produced and indeed you may have seen angels upon the clouds...nice thoughts and thanks for sharing with us
~HUGS~
Tracie

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It is the harmony of the universe



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4 posted 2002-05-13 07:42 PM


Noah:  Thank you for reading and your comments are always so caring. I appreciate your response.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-05-13 07:43 PM


Joyce:  Thanks for your response.  Hope you had a happy day yesterday!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-05-13 07:44 PM


Tracie:  Thank you for your nice comments. It's good to hear from you.

Betty Lou Hebert

Bridget Shenachie
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7 posted 2002-05-13 11:19 PM


Betty--I loved this poem.  I'm a cloud watcher, too.  Thanks for capturing this.

Shenachie

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8 posted 2002-05-14 07:50 AM


Beautifully imagery and sentiments Trillium ... you've captured this in such a lovely way.  From one cloud watcher to another ... much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

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9 posted 2002-05-14 08:26 AM


It is fun to watch clouds from time to time.

Thanks for the pleasant read.
Melton

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10 posted 2002-05-15 07:05 PM


Thanks to all of you who commented on this poem.  Glad to learn there are many people who enjoy watching clouds as much as I do.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2002-05-19 01:03 PM


BettyLou~
Awwwwww girly ... ya' got me with this one~
Just lovely ... I sooooo enjoy the imaginative formations of the clouds~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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12 posted 2002-05-19 02:43 PM


Marge:  Thanks so much!  It's always a treat to see one of your nice comments. Hope all is well with you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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