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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2002-03-25 11:54 PM

I marvel at you Jesus,
I can't even surmise to say,
How my heart wants to show praise,
I marvel at your love,
How you wrap your arms around me,
Show me that you care,
Never hesitating to be there,
Jesus your always right on time,
I marvel at your ways,
The way you know me inside and out,
The way you make me jump and shout,
The way I was made to praise you,
Jesus you amaze me over and over,
Just when I am feeling low,
You pull me up and invite me to sup with you,
Jesus your all I need.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2002-03-26 10:30 AM

Rosebud1229,

I like the texture of your poem. The mix of rhyme and no rhyme and the chaotic meter and syllable count. Not that you were looking for my critique, but I say all of this just to say.... I like the way you did this one. Oh, and I especially love the message here. Praise GOD! -Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2002-03-26 01:41 PM

A wonderful tribute to God's enduring love. Joyce

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

3 posted 2002-03-26 06:26 PM

Jesus you amaze me over and over

Rose, He will never stop amazing you. You have only touched lightly on how amazing He is... his love, his caring, and when you're feeling low, He is always there, right on time.

You've penned a lot,
Melton

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

4 posted 2002-03-26 10:32 PM

thanks Bob, sometimes It's so hard to say in a few lines how amazed I am over and over of Gods Love.
Joyce your so right God amazing love is forever and ever.
Melton I am in awe everyday of Jesus.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-03-27 10:27 PM

(smiles) Oh Rose, I know just how you feel, it too is always complicating for me to say exactly how I feel for Him, and sometimes I always feel I leave so much out accidently, but I also know with all my heart just following His examples will make Him proud of us all as He watches over us! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rose, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2002-03-28 01:27 AM

RoseBud~
Amazed just about sums it up~
He lifts me higher than I thought I could be lifted~

Bless you for your sharing of thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

7 posted 2002-03-28 09:27 PM

thank you Marge, I continue to be amazed and blessed beyond anything I can imagine.

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2002-03-28 09:29 PM

Noah, thank you for showing so much love whom I know where your light comes from our sweet Jesus.

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