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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2002-03-14 05:56 AM


thank you for meeting me here today
was afraid you wouldn't come
after me not being there
so mamy times when I said I would

I don't have any gifts to give
or any big long speech
just what you see here is what there is
but I guess you knew that

thought you should know I hear you
sometimes when I turn down the music
and look your way, yes I hear you
wish you talked louder it would be easier

for me to do the right things
you know how I am with clatter
always trying to get more into a day
and well, I just don't here you talk

not that I am ignoring you, I
well yes I guess I was not listening
and maybe I thought you would just
always be there if I wanted you

thank you for being here today
and for listening to me for awhile
and yes I would love to spend some time
just you and I by the river

and by the way, can you forgive me?

©Dark

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Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22
Posts 774
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1 posted 2002-03-14 08:04 AM


If we all spent more time listening and talking with God, we wouldn't endure so many of the heartaches we bring on ourselves. A nice reminder, thanks for sharing it.
Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02
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2 posted 2002-03-14 08:48 AM


This is beautiful! Thanks for sharing.

((Dark))

-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2002-03-14 10:58 AM


D
(wow)
this is one that goes right to the heart
you are awesome, you know that?

Martie
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4 posted 2002-03-14 11:10 AM


Thoughtful writing, DS.  
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2002-03-14 11:46 AM


Dulci, thank you babe,,,,good to see you again..hope all is well

Silver, a pleasure to have you visit

SEA, thank you for being surpraised, that is a good thing

Ms Martie, I figure my loving thoughts have to come from some place outside of me...I prefer they are from here...thank you babe

Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
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Could Be Anywhere...
6 posted 2002-03-14 02:19 PM


DS,
sad but true that asking for forgivness
seems to always be an after thought, eh?
Good illustration of relationship...
Daniel

... was once upon, bleeding
     and Tramp Poet for a time.
      Now; I'm just little ole me
       "Say friend; spare a rhyme"?...

Trillium
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7 posted 2002-03-14 06:32 PM


Dark Stranger:  Enjoyed your poem and your honesty in it.  also the water sounds and bird trills are so welcome.  There is no sign of spring where I live.  Thanks.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-03-14 07:10 PM


Dark Stranger:  I had to come back and tell you that the musical accompaniment to your poem turned out to be another site that had appeared underneath this one.  When I clicked off of Passions, there it was. Wanted you to know I was not losing my mind! Although I must say it was very appropriate for "by the river".

Betty Lou Hebert

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Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-03-14 08:48 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is sooooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, He will always forgive you, for He is here for us always and compassion will always follow through the tears we cry just as His light will help us grow! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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10 posted 2002-03-15 06:31 PM


Dark Stranger,

I don't get out much past "Spiritual Journey" and it was a true pleasure to read your poetry here.  I like the one on one discussion between you and your friend.  I appreciate the patience that your friend has to meet with you even though you've ignored your friend in the past.  I think you've got a pretty good friend there and I kind of think that your friend will forgive you since you've asked......  Hey, maybe I'll meet your friend someday when I cross over that river one day myself.  Amen.  GOD bless you and thank you for allowing me to share in your most intimate conversation.  -Bob

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2002-03-17 07:10 PM


Who could not forgive you D..you share so much of yourself with others...and I am sure
He approves..

*w at least most of the time...

M

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