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0 posted 2002-02-12 03:19 PM



Jonah and the Big Fish

“I won’t go! Don’t send me Lord!”
“Please grant me this one wish.”
But God refused and I rebelled
and landed in the belly of a fish

God spoke to me, gave His command
Go to Ninevah, Jonah, you'll be my man
Proclaim to the city that their sin is great
Repent of your wickedness before it's too late

But I ran from God, to a ship I did flee
Thought I’d hide from His presence and then be free
But the Lord sent strong winds upon the ocean
as I slept unaware of all the commotion

The ship's captain woke me and in anger he said
“If this ship breaks apart, it will be on your head.”
What he said was true, God's anger was at me
“Take me up on deck, cast me into the sea.”

Now the Lord had prepared for me a large whale
To swallow me up and for three days I did rail
In darkness I prayed, “My sins please forgive
and I'll serve you Lord as long as I live.”

God had great pity so He spoke his command
And the fished spewed me up onto dry land
Never run from God for there's nowhere to hide
If He gives you a mission, He'll walk by your side

JONAH 4:2 You are a gracious God and merciful, slow to anger and of great kindness

Cheryl McClellan
July 29, 01


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Lighthousebob
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1 posted 2002-02-12 06:40 PM


Cheryl,

I so enjoy reading your poems because they bring back such fond memories for me... I love the Bible story of Jonah and the Whale (Big Fish).  I played Jonah once in a Halloween play where we took the audience into a room covered in plastic, the belly of the whale, and squirted them all with water and threw cabbage on them... it really brought the story to life.  Anyway, a nice memory for me. Again, you've done a fine job of telling the story of Jonah poetically.  GOD bless you.

-Bob

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2 posted 2002-02-12 06:55 PM


Definately a very nice new rendition of an old story...nicely done.

J~

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3 posted 2002-02-12 07:22 PM


What a wonderful way you told this story, So well expressed, and so well written, I enjoyed reading it very much Cheryl. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-02-13 12:13 PM


Bob, I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I've written several Bible stories for kids in rhyme. I'll post a few along the way. I think the whale's stomach for Halloween sounded like great fun.

J, thanks for checking it out. Glad you liked.

Floria, I always enjoy reading your replies. Thanks as always.

Cheryl

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5 posted 2002-02-13 03:06 PM


Cheryl: This was such a good read! It's good to read some of those favorite Bible stories set to poetry!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-02-14 09:43 AM


Betty Lou, thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Cheryl
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7 posted 2002-02-15 08:34 PM




YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I just love how you bring these Bible stories to life, these are soooooo delightful and teach us great lessons and morales of life! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I enjoy this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-03-03 09:49 PM


Noah, I'm so sorry I missed your kind comments earlier. Thanks so much for reading and I'm glad you liked it.   Cheryl
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