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His Poet
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0 posted 2002-01-23 02:50 PM



He was called the Beloved, Christ's dearest friend
His devoted disciple ~ steadfast till the end
Exiled to the isle of Patmos, for proclaiming Christ as King
They thought this would stop his testimony
But it did not stop a thing.

For it was there on the Lord's own day
That John heard a loud voice say
"I'm the Alpha and Omega, the beginning and the end
You must write what you hear and see today
A message to the churches I must send"

When John saw, he fell at His feet as if dead
Jesus laid His hand on John and said
"It's me, my friend, you've nothing to dread."

John saw the great throne, all the angels gathered round
Ten thousand times ten thousand in number
They praised His name in joyful sound
With voices that rumbled like thunder

"Worthy is He, the Lamb that was slain
To receive honor and glory and power."
“The one who died and bore our shame
All creatures praise His holy name.”

The seals were opened and so were John's eyes
Things to come can scarce be described
For under the altar he heard martyrs cries
As kings begged for death, from His face they must hide

John saw fire and hail, mingled with blood
He saw death and destruction, no sun to shine
For those on earth who hated His word
Woe to the world and man's decline

Thank you, John, for God's revelation
May it spur each man to seek salvation
For those who love Christ, there's an end to our fears
Christ wins the battle and dries all our tears

To Hell and death He holds the key
Satan's defeat is Christ's victory
We'll be clothed in white and with Him we'll reign
Spending eternity praising His name

Cheryl McClellan, 7/17/01


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1 posted 2002-01-23 03:12 PM


This is beautiful, Cheryl.  A beautiful message from you and John. Joyce
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2 posted 2002-01-23 05:14 PM


Cheryl:  You have a knack of presenting these Bible stories so I can feel the emotions taking place.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-01-23 06:50 PM


"Christ wins the battle and dries all our tears" You send the message out in a most beautiful way,Cheryl. Thank you. floria

Floria

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But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

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4 posted 2002-01-23 09:09 PM


Cheryl, Revelations is often a difficult book for many people to read and understand. You write about most beautifully! Thanks for sharing.
-newell

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5 posted 2002-01-23 09:52 PM


Ah Cheryl, you are Gods' scribe
The lost sheep of twelve tribes
ask you for direction.
take care and God bless

His Poet
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6 posted 2002-01-24 07:53 AM


Joyce and Betty Lou, Thank you both for reading. I love trying to present these Bible stories in the first person, using as much direct scripture as I can. I'm glad you enjoyed. Cheryl
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7 posted 2002-01-24 07:55 AM


Floria, The Book of Revelation, which use to be so complex to me, is really a beautiful revelation. The last Bible study I did on this opened my eyes to things I had not previously been able to grasp. Thanks for replying. Cheryl
His Poet
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8 posted 2002-01-24 07:56 AM


Newell, thanks so much for the encouraging remarks. I'm glad you thought I presented it well. Cheryl
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9 posted 2002-01-24 07:58 AM


Mauddib, How kind your words are but I'm certainly no Bible scholar. I just love the Word and enjoy, just like you, trying to relate these stories in poetry form. Many thanks, Cheryl
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10 posted 2002-01-29 08:47 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, you speak of this chapter from the Revelations so wonderfully, this is marvelous and very hard for most to understand indeed, I am impressed! (kiss on cheek) Such a wonderful triumph of faith and salvation fills these words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Cheryl, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ellie LeJeune
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11 posted 2002-01-29 08:54 PM


what an inspiring gift of poetry! Thank you!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

His Poet
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12 posted 2002-01-30 10:16 AM


Thank you Noah. I love the book of Revelation. It use to trouble me but I did a Bible Study on it and it become so much clearer and it really is a story of triumph and beauty.

Ellie, glad you enjoyed this. Thanks. Cheryl

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