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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Dreamer Of Dreams The restlessness of woe the frosted winds that blow could never darken days nor cover dreams with snow I feel the heavens smile through the calm of sun's yawn in a baby's angelic coo at the soft of another dawn Yes, time may cover me with years that bring a tear... as long as He lives inside I know I need not fear And, butterflies they rise in the eyes of a hopeful heart knowing with every end God creates a start He's the poet of my breath restoring me from above... my greatest inspiration the purest of all love Bitterness may rage to rip my life at the seams but, I know I need not worry through the shadow of sorrow's screams for, I am the Lord's masterpiece and, I am a dreamer of dreams By Melissa P. Monette |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Melissa I can't begin to tell you how much I loved this one. I printed it out for a little book I keep and treasure of poems that I love, and I especially loved this line... "He's the poet of my breath" (isn't that the truth?) Beautiful, simply beautiful! ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah, Melissa, my dear friend...I am so inspired by this precious poem to the Glory of our Lord and every word do I echo with you. You have a magnificent gift and a most lovely humble spirit...Love to you, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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SavedbyGrace Junior Member
since 2002-01-16
Posts 36MA |
What a sweet poem! I also love that line "He's the poet of my breath", as well as the phrase "the soft of another dawn". What beautiful pictures they paint! Thanks for posting this. Traci  "For by grace are ye saved through faith; and that not of yourselves: it is the gift of God: not of works, lest any man should boast." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"I hear the heavens smile" Oh what a lovely poem. floria |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Yes, time may cover me with years that bring a tear... as long as He lives inside I know I need not fear ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Melissa, this is so lovely. Thank you for writing with so much heart. Hugs, Deb |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Mellissa. Especially enjoyed your last strophe: Bitterness may rage to rip my life at the seams but, I know I need not worry through the shadow of sorrow's screams for, I am the Lord's masterpiece and, I am a dreamer of dreams -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (sigh) He will always be the butterfly of our world, guiding us with wings of faith and fluttering with friendship and love for all our hearts! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I feel the heavens smile through the calm of sun's yawn in a baby's angelic coo at the soft of another dawn Yes, time may cover me with years that bring a tear... as long as He lives inside I know I need not fear And, butterflies they rise in the eyes of a hopeful heart knowing with every end God creates a start He's the poet of my breath restoring me from above... my greatest inspiration the purest of all love ======================================= Melis this is so very lovely ... its flow is perfect...its inspire pure poetry...and its message divine... "He's the poet of my breath and what a beautiful line that is!! ( thats a "I wish I had wrote that" line)  thank you for sharing this...I'm glad I didnt miss it with all my comp problems of late. Wonderful uplifting write Poetess Melis |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, Beautiful poem of optimism and praise. Dennis :^) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes as the other poets have said. this is a beautiful testament. Joyce |
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L Tiuch Member
since 2000-02-04
Posts 151NY |
This is simply beautiful...and it is important to remember we are His masterpieces and we are never alone. Thank you for sharing this. Linda |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Melissa, my comments will seem redundant. This is the beauty of poetry and I do believe a God-breathed gift. You use it well to glory Him. Thanks for sharing. Cheryl |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I loved this poem. You did a fine job with it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If this were mine...and I am ashamed to admit, I do not have the skill to write such, I would have someone well versed in calligraphy transfer this to some beautiful parchment paper, then frame it, and hang it where I could see it every day.... A beautiful write, MelyBee...I am very proud of you for this one.... |
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