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amberdragoness
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since 2001-12-22

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0 posted 2002-01-07 10:26 PM

The Dragon's Altar

Hidden by swriling mists a Darkling Lord
stands before the altar
Long leather coat and flaming sword

To this place he once came to pray
such sweet memories
Till a velvet touch led him away

A Dragon stirs but still she sleeps
A smile on her lips
She tries not to weep

The heart remembers she sheds a tear
returns to sweet dreams
A Love from yesteryear

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2002-01-07 11:09 PM

Welcome to "Passions" amberdragoness ...

Your poem is very creative and offers for me a very nice mythological interlude from the usual. Thank you for sharing. -Bob

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-08 10:15 AM

This evokes so many images and welcome to passions.

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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3 posted 2002-01-08 10:37 AM

very vivid imagery in your first post! Welcome!!! Please check your email for a special greeting!!

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
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4 posted 2002-01-08 02:11 PM

Welcome! This is an interesting poem. Was it inspired by Lord Byron's poem, Darkness?
-newell

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amberdragoness
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since 2001-12-22

Posts 9

5 posted 2002-01-08 02:27 PM

Thank you all for your kind words.This is the first poem I have written.I haven't read very much poetry till a dear friend showed me this forum.

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

6 posted 2002-01-08 06:37 PM

Very interesting read. floria

Lord Kelath Von Saint
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since 2001-12-13

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7 posted 2002-01-08 09:03 PM

I am touched. deeply beautiful, and wonderfully written. Welcome, *smiles*, You will heal and grow with everyday. Remember, That Lord still lives, wrapped in black, perhaps but in the deepest shadows of the mind...but still, alive....he knows you feel him still,,,,and he smiles from that memory...be you well, and Thank you,.--Lord Kelath

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