Salt -Tears In A Black Sea

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Salt -Tears In A Black Sea

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-05 02:55 AM

Just the salt-tears
in a black ocean
lost upon the rocks.
Lightening splits the darkness
into rifts of electrical
streamers.Lonely ships seek
a guiding light, a Lighthouse
at the end of a risky sea.
And, the ocean waves echo
over and over~~~
go to the light,
go to the light,
go to the light.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-05 09:42 AM

This is so beautiful and you know what Irish, I got the goosbumps because I recently wrote a poem about, black ocean of tears...I guess poets think alike. this is lovely, floria

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-01-05 12:40 PM

oh I do like this very much!! Very well done!!!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2002-01-05 02:01 PM

as a lover of lighthouses I enjoyed the thoughts in this piece so much

Kathleen--
Neither genius, fame, nor love show the greatness of the soul.
Only kindness can do that. ~Jean Baptiste Henri Lacordaire~

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-01-05 05:38 PM

This is really arresting and I did enjoy it!
Good writing.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-01-05 07:38 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may His lighthouse of heavenly love always guide us to faith and serenity and peace! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your heart directs the words like the lighthouse you draw! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-01-06 11:41 AM

I hear God calling me
Come to the light and see
My love for eternity
Come to the light; I am free.

Thank you Ivy for your bright inspiration.

Bringing God's Love through
perfectlovepoetry.com

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

7 posted 2002-01-06 03:45 PM

Oh, Wow! My spirit soars and I so feel His light and His Love shining through every word! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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