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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-12-13 11:18 PM






Enchantment

Outside, the fog, this winter day,
Hides all familiar things away,
But in the swirls of moving air,
I see a band of angels there.
They spin and rise, then swoop and fall,
While now and then I hear them call.
Their voices in the winds that blow,
Drift musically across the snow.
I watch until they disappear
And only I know they were here.
I wish that I could share with you
The sheer enchantment of this view!



Betty Lou Hebert

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 12-13-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-14 07:39 AM


Share it Trillium???  You just did, what beautiful images you have given me this morning...Your pen has brushed a lovely piece.  Thanks for this... Bonnie
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2 posted 2001-12-14 06:58 PM




(smiles) And you just did, sweet friend! (sigh) The voice and beauty of angels shine in all your lovely words, sweet friends, I could envision the angels fluttering with love and grace! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet Betty, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-14 08:40 PM


What a delightful experience to be enchanted by angels and by your very provocative poetry.  -Bob
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4 posted 2001-12-14 11:57 PM


Bonnie:  Thank for your nice comments. The swirling fog suggested this poem to me.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-12-14 11:59 PM


Noah:  Thank you for your warm and caring response to this poem.  I appreciate your message very much!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2001-12-14 11:59 PM


Thanks Bob.  Glad you enjoyed the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2001-12-15 09:01 AM


Betty, dear, this surely enchanted my heart! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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8 posted 2001-12-15 01:48 PM


A dismal fog brightened by the presents of angels!  Wonderful thought and poem.  Thank you for sharing your talent and uplifting spirit.  Your poetry brightens every day.  
  Rae

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9 posted 2001-12-15 10:53 PM


ellie:  Thank you so much!

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2001-12-15 10:56 PM


Rae:  You give me such wonderful compliments
on my work and I appreciate them so much! Thank you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2001-12-20 12:53 PM


This is lovely Betty.  Joyce
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12 posted 2001-12-20 11:20 PM


Thank you Joyce.

Betty Lou Hebert

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13 posted 2001-12-31 02:26 PM


I believe in angels.. they are wonderful and so is your poem, I could just picture it all. lovely scene, floria
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