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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2001-11-30 09:14 PM


Pearl drops gently touch the windshield
Like the shooting stars sliding across the sky -
Morning flakes tenderly dress the grass with winter's air
Like the silky cloth smoothly covering my skin.
Singing praises with a gracious voice
Of birds and sincere mind -
We have come with a humble heart, a thankful heart.
May Lord continue to bless us with ordinary things.

//I awoke one morning some days ago and white were at the top of the green and when I was in my car, the rain slided on the windshield like the shooting stars.


~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (edited 12-01-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-12-01 08:26 AM



This is lovely, but I cannot think of a title for it.  Perhaps someone will.  The imagery was very nice!  Thank you...

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2 posted 2001-12-02 12:57 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, it's as if nature is humming every time His drops touch the leaves and windshields. (smiles) I think the most beautiful title for this would be "Pearls Of Silk". I love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vivian, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-04 01:11 AM


This is lovely and I think you might call it  "God's Gifts, The Extraordinary Things"
Joyce

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