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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2001-11-06 05:20 PM


Jealousy sickens my mind.
Through the history he ruined our mind.
Cain was jealous his brother Abel,
And see how it ended up.
He killed his own and only brother.
Eve cried over the dead like
Water wants to rush over the bound
But it doesn't come through.
Her world was crushing down before her.
See what Cain had done to his family.
And what about Jacob and Esau.
They fight over inheritance using cheap tricks.
Tricked their father to give blessing,
While he can't be seeing.
And the sons were just like the father.
The twelve brothers sold their younger brother,
Joseph, to others out of their jealousy.
But God takes care about everyone.
He leads our way even in our misery.
Joseph who was betrayed by their brothers,
Had become a trustee of the King of Egypt.
He solved the famine and dreams problem,
And became a hero of his time.
His brothers came before him on their knees,
To seek for forgiveness.
Now you know what God does to the unfortunate.
He is the way, and he'll bring you through.
The good always turns out the bad.
Joseph's faith was saved through faith
Just like everyone of us.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.home.com/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-11-06 09:21 PM


Very well put.  And jealousy is a poison that hurts he who is jealous the most.  Joyce
WhtDove
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2 posted 2001-11-07 09:38 PM


I believe this is the first time I've seen this written of! Great point!

I shall pass this on to someone I know who needs it.

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keoni
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since 2000-10-16
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Up in the mountains in the NFC
3 posted 2001-11-08 02:19 PM


This is a good poem. The ending was very powerful. Great job.
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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Universal Mind
4 posted 2001-11-10 12:58 PM


Thanks for all the feedback. I'm not a very good Christain though. I don't pray enough or seek God enough.

Love,
Lizzy Vivian
http://members.shaw.ca/home0/

~I'm a person of two faces, Who is neither extraordinary nor plain. I'm not the most outspoken

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