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NathanS
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since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

0 posted 2001-10-04 09:28 PM

This is a short poem... but oh well, i thought id share it.

A gap i once had
filled from above

A feeling i once felt
filled with his love

A path i once had
filled with his light

A soldier of God
willing to fight

-Nathan

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-04 09:36 PM

Nathan, this is excellent, short or not! I like this

NathanS
Member

since 2001-09-27

Posts 106
CA

2 posted 2001-10-04 10:24 PM

Thanks

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2001-10-04 11:10 PM

This may be short but it says a great deal. Good job.

Betty Lou Hebert

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

4 posted 2001-10-05 12:23 PM

short and sweet but filled with power.
Well done!

~Marie~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2001-10-05 01:56 PM

Sounds like you've got the full armor on for sure. Nice short poem. -Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-10-06 02:32 PM

Very nice and concise. Joyce

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

7 posted 2001-10-08 12:14 PM

I really like this. I'm always so wordy and I so appreciate poets like you who can say so very much with so few words. Thanks for sharing it.
Rae

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