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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-09-30 08:08 PM


Faith is a mustard seed
lying on the earth
awaiting the rainbow’s dance
of sun and watered birth.

A spark of light, a drip of gold
above Sargasso Sea
illuminates and quenches grand
the halting yellow seed.

Then warmth of land and nutrient
feed and cloister well
the little life that lies in wait
so captured in its spell.

As spreading leaves and blossoms reach
toward Creator’s realm
Cruciferae does form its cross
to show Who’s at the helm.

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 09-30-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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Idaho, USA
1 posted 2001-09-30 09:23 PM


I enjoyed this poem so much.  Excellent!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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2 posted 2001-09-30 10:22 PM


This is lovely.  Joyce
sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29
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3 posted 2001-10-03 08:52 PM


Vas,

Very lovely write. Thank you for sharing.  
~Marie~

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