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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-08-20 10:29 AM



If I act as if perfect...
-----but have not love...
all my deeds will surely pass away
-----BUTif I step aside
-----allow His will
-----then His glory shall receive, if but a tiny sparkle,
-----by the touch of His awesome power, at work in me

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 08-20-2001).]

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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-08-20 01:57 PM


And so it goes.  His work goes on forever.  Joyce
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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2 posted 2001-08-20 05:39 PM


So so true Virginia...if we pretend we are something we are not, then God's love cannot reflect in us...this is beautiful!
Cindi

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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2001-08-20 07:26 PM


We each have it in our power to reflect a tiny speck of His.

Betty Lou Hebert

jfreak
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4 posted 2001-08-20 10:22 PM


VAS,

I agree with others about the content....but I am just wondering about the construction...
what is with the lines in the poem...not saying that they are wrong but I am just wondering the purpose...that is all...trying to get the whole feeling of the work.

J~

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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5 posted 2001-08-21 12:21 PM


Well, the lines are there because that's the only way I've had any success in indenting a line. When I try tab or spacing, it doesn't stay after I post it.  So to get the indentation I want, that's what I do.
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