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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2001-08-09 05:02 PM



"Rainbows"

When little clouds get rough at play
and sometimes block each other's way
like stubborn children in the sky,
frustration mounts, they start to cry.

They bump their heads with quite a smack.
The growl until the thunders crack.
They cry in anguish, cry in pain;
till all the world is filled with rain.

Loving parent, bound from birth,
Mother Nature soothes the Earth.
She brings up light to paint the frown;
a colorful smile that's upside down.

A sign that signals "all is right"
and gives the world a face that's bright;
a bow for two that binds their lease
inspires the coulds to play in peace.


© Copyright 2001 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2001-08-09 09:55 PM


What a wonderful imagination you have!  I loved the idea behind this poem and enjoyed it so much.

Betty Lou Hebert

rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
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New Orleans, Louisiana
2 posted 2001-08-09 10:32 PM


this is pretty dope, i liked it alot, it's a good metaphor for clouds, i dug it alot, bravo.

"freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin

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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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Washington State
3 posted 2001-08-10 02:06 PM


God's promise, the rainbow, unleashes your imagination in a way that I too, dig!  Joyce
2dalimit
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Mississippi coast
4 posted 2001-08-14 11:21 AM


This is soooo beautiful. Thanks.

Melton

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-08-14 09:36 PM


This one REALLY made me smile!  
illusion
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6 posted 2001-08-15 10:50 AM


Your poem had the same effect rainbows have - it made me smile.  
The Lady
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The Southwest
7 posted 2007-03-17 11:54 PM




the only thing lovlier
than reading this
would be hearing you read it

beautiful


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