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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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Two Brothers-One Father small faced, tight grinned hE laughed at Pilate's fate Eternally washing hands in Hellish flames familiar in slow motion eye catches A voice in the night A touch in the healing day Exchanging soul glances bittersweet and revealing One brother enchanted by the Light the otheR filled without a sinner's shame Seamless symmetry, syncopated heartbeats but they couldn't be more different he laid the Gold tome before the unchastE onE Its been 20 years since hE last saw hiS own face Unrecognizable to hiS old friends Dark thin brows perched over stabbing eyes yet something implored hiM to open the Gift of Love living a life in a day, a decision from the disciples and it was done the first step toward healing the burns from Hell the salve from the pages of Gold bringing enraptured relief from grief hE laid his soul bare, before Him ravished by raven pecks hiS brother taking the hand offered and placing it gently in the Hands of God |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
hE laid his soul bare, before Him ravished by raven pecks hiS brother taking the hand offered and placing it gently in the Hands of God I think this sums it all up...very well done SR! *S* |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
This is well written.... though I do not know of exactly who your poem is written about, but you did get my curiosity going about the two brothers... what I got out of your poem was the exchange of words and emotions between Pontius Pilate and Jesus when Pilate washes his hands of Jesus' blood before declaring the Saviors judgement of death by the cross... but this probably has nothing to do with your poem. It was a good poem, even though I didn't quite understand what I was reading. -Bob |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very intriguing piece of work. I love the ending here. It's well written!  <*\\\>< |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
beyond beautiful...These words brought tears,... Our world is full of anger, many experiencing emotions they don't understand, I believe we are standing on the thresehold....God is holding out his hand, Eventually, I believe, all will come to know the Glory of God, every knee shall bend....and there will a peace that passes understanding~! Thank you SR, ATOV |
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