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Trillium
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0 posted 2001-07-11 10:27 PM





Unto the Hills

I wandered through the countryside.
The autumn woods were sere and bare.
I climbed a hill, looked far and wide.
It was a view beyond compare
And as I stood and gazed around,
Admiring the land so fair,
As far as I could see, I found,
No sign of man, but God was there!


Betty Lou Hebert

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1 posted 2001-07-11 10:41 PM


Absolutely wonderful Trillium ~ loved it first to last.  Bonnie
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2 posted 2001-07-11 11:07 PM


Your poems only get better.  This is great.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-07-12 09:58 AM


a pleasure to read
Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2001-07-12 04:46 PM


In the beginning God.................
I felt the vastness of open space as I too looked from that mountain top through your words and it was beautiful to feel the presence of God.  Thank you for sharing your experiences in the Lord and with nature.  Bob <><

Trillium
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5 posted 2001-07-12 05:45 PM


Thanks to all of you for reading and I enjoyed your nice comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2001-07-13 06:23 PM


I really enjoyed this one trill!

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

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7 posted 2001-07-13 11:10 PM


BettyLou~
Perfect !
And I really love the title.
~*Marge*~

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8 posted 2001-07-13 11:35 PM


He is everywhere.  Wonderful!!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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9 posted 2001-07-14 06:46 AM


Thanks. So serene. You have capture another "Happy Place".

Melton

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10 posted 2001-07-14 03:15 PM


scout:  Thanks for your comments.


Marge:  Glad you liked the title of this. It did seem appropriate.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2001-07-14 03:17 PM


Lone Wolf and 2dalimit:  Thank you both for reading and I appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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