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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me 
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I woke up early morning, Not even day, When the sun spoke up, And shined into me. It blurred my vision, As heaven was in my view, And there He lay, The forgotten truth. As He handed me the words, Hidden between lines, I felt the questions being answered, Forgiven that time. As I fell down into bed, Where life was once ill, I awoke again, This time tranquil. [January 25, 1998] xscoutx |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
scout, Way to go.... Yes, receiving a Word from God, regardless of time, has a wonderful healing quality. Good personal challenge here to overcome my flesh in the AM hours. Bob <>< |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
Forgiveness is more than just a clearing of our "records". Your poem seemed to suggest that it also involves an impartation of something from God. Enjoyed this. Stephen. |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
thank you, i have so much more poetry but it was all lost, many flowed like this one... xscoutx |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Oh Dear Scout. I am sorry your poetry was lost if it was like this one. You will write more. Joyce |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
scout that really rocked man I'm becoming more and more fond of your stuff you stand for all that you believe which rox. I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
thanx the_rescue Joyce, when i was in 10th grade, i decided i would pursue my career in creative writing (when i was a child it was all i wanted to be although, english has always been my worst subject) so i applied to the Walnut Hill school in Natick, Mass. to go to boarding school there, and I sent a lot of my best works, and I thought I had extra copies, but I lost them, and i never got accepted and i never got my poems back, and then i went on my year and a half drought from 98-99, and it wasn't until my senior year of highschool i started to fast every lunch, because I didn't want to waste money on boring school lunches (considering i was a vegetarian and i had nothing to eat) that I would write poetry and that's when I gained it back, although i lost a lot, i hope to write a lot more... xscoutx |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
scout: It sounds as if you have really suffered for your poetry, but I'm glad to read that you are still writing and I'm sure you have a great deal to say! Will look forward to seeing more of it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Scout~ Nice thoughts ... You write well ... I visited your web site and hope to see you do much more with it. Your talent in service of God's Word is to be applauded. Bless you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
My WebSite? haha, i haven't worked with that thing in forever... I never have time, maybe one day i'll get around to it, and link it to all these poems... thanks for your comments... Trill: sometimes i don't think my poetry is my own, sometimes i believe it's gift, though oust people i share stuff with, the idea flies over their head. I don't consider poetry suffering, as long as i can write, i'm happy, God has given me a way to tell my feelings indirectly (and also His) I consider poetry more of a medication then suffering. xscoutx |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Scout, I must agree with you...your poetry IS a gift, and to keep it secret is to keep God's love a secret... that's why He shared his Son... that's why you share your words... thank you. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was a wonderful write, scout. Sorry to read that a portion of your poetry was lost. That is a tragedy, but hopefully your muse will stick around and inspire more. Enjoyed this.  All writing comes |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i hope to find what you have written here...this was wonderful. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You are very talented. You keep writin 'em. I'll keep readin 'em. Melton |
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