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scout
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since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

0 posted 2001-06-27 02:29 AM

God danced
interlinking elements
through dust
Unfolded
As all defined
balanced

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[November 30, 1999 in 30 seconds while placing words together with magnetic poetry, and out came this without my knowledge]

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears." - Ez. 24:1

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BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

1 posted 2001-06-27 07:22 AM

Wow Scout ~ Only 30 seconds to create this outstanding little gem...Great piece! Bonnie

Romy
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida

2 posted 2001-06-27 10:07 AM

Interesting! God's plan of creation? This 30 second poem says alot to me!
Debbie

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-06-27 12:10 PM

The words and thoughts were there, You just didn't know it. Concise and perfect. Joyce

scout
Member

since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

4 posted 2001-06-27 02:10 PM

thanks, i did it at some online magnetic poetry site, and it was timed, they wanted to see what you could make in 30 seconds, it was for some contest, i didn't win though, ugh!!!

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears." - Ez. 24:1

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2001-06-27 02:33 PM

scout,

Good... especially written in only 30 seconds given limited words to chose from... Hey, this even makes some sense. Life begins with God and in the end all will balance out. Amen. Bob <><

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-06-27 03:00 PM

You should have won!

Betty Lou Hebert

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-27 09:58 PM

Wow, very impressive for 30 seconds worth of work! Great job, scout!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

scout
Member

since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

8 posted 2001-06-28 10:39 AM

thanks for all your replies... maybe i just wasn't supposed to win...

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

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Stephanos

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since 2000-07-31

Posts 3618
Statesboro, GA, USA

9 posted 2001-06-28 05:21 PM

a few words can say so much.

concise is powerful sometimes.

Enjoyed this one.

Stephen.

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