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scout
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0 posted 2001-06-18 01:50 PM


If there is any hope...

Now come by my side,
Enter my life,
End the falling of the light,
Drown me in superfluity...

Just as He came,
Entering my life,
Suspending a simulacrum,
Urging my name,
Saving the day...

----xscoutx----
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears." -

© Copyright 2001 Scott Lillich - All Rights Reserved
MoeRocko
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1 posted 2001-06-18 01:52 PM


Groovy!

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care...  ~John Lennon
  

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2 posted 2001-06-18 02:08 PM


Hey great first post and welcome to Passions  
Zu

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3 posted 2001-06-18 02:14 PM


Hey,

   Welcome to Passions! This is a good start I hope to see more just like it   check your email too. Until your next poem

          -- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

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4 posted 2001-06-18 02:30 PM


hey welcome to passions nice right hope to see more.

The Rescue

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

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5 posted 2001-06-18 02:53 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...this is a very nice first post...i enjoyed it...thansk and hope tos ee you read sahre and reply more...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

angel_2401
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6 posted 2001-06-18 02:57 PM


Great first post. Keep writing!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

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7 posted 2001-06-18 03:51 PM


Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed this one! I hope to see you around more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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Welcome!   hope to see more from you    ~SEA
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9 posted 2001-06-18 11:25 PM


hey scott....
what's a "simulacrum"...?  i feel stupid.  i can't find a dictionary in the dark either.  i liked this.  its short and potent.  and its... happy.  i wish i could write the happy kind.  i always said i would if i ever wrote and now look at me *sobs pathetically*..

well take care and don't eat too many popsicles with out me.

dr. jo

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

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10 posted 2001-06-19 10:00 AM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry.  I liked this first post, and I look forward to reading more.  Keep sharing your work with us.
Nicely done here.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

FoxXena
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11 posted 2001-06-19 05:29 PM


This is a great way of showing how God can change us positively. Wonderful work and welcome to Passions!  

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

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12 posted 2001-06-19 07:26 PM


this is great!  welcome to passions.  i hope to see a lot of you here.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Cinch01
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13 posted 2001-06-19 09:45 PM


Great poem! Keep writting!
scout
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14 posted 2001-06-28 08:20 PM


i just wanted to tell people that this was an acrostic (and plus i want my pic to be on my poem!)

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

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