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VAS
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2001-05-05 12:04 PM


To Bloom a Wake of Smiles
Virginia Salter

Morning of a new day
possibilities arise
to write one’s history
one step at a time

Will my history bloom
as the future passes by
what may lie ahead
as the past ticks on behind

Might there be a wake of smiles
or tears that bleed concern
might hope toughen my foundation
as faith more surely burns

Will my lips confess a love
that flows from my Sweet Lord
will my hands be open wide
not clenched as ‘round a sword

In Your will, may I stand
seeking to listen more than speak
as each hour You give, unfolds,
help me, true, Your Word to seek.

©April 30,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-05-05 01:07 AM


Nice Prayer, VAS  Joyce
Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-05-05 04:25 AM


Wonderful work, it flowed very well.  
I admire your skill a great deal.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
3 posted 2001-05-05 08:02 PM


Good poem and I think we all would like to leave a "wake of smiles".  Effective phraseology.

Betty Lou Hebert

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
4 posted 2001-05-06 11:41 AM


This is one prayer I'm saying with you.  

<*\\\><    

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
5 posted 2001-05-06 12:19 PM


You all have said such nice things, thanks so much for reading and taking time to comment.
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