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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-04-23 07:55 PM



Sitting here,
thinking of you,
it's hard to concentrate in you.
My mind drifts to other things.
You're so subtle and so gentle.
Competing for control are,
you and my thoughts.
Sometimes you win,
sometimes they win.
I wish that you were always here with me.
To feel you, is to be with you.
To breathe you, is to feel you.
To be with you, is to breathe you.
Sitting here thinking of you,
is easy to love you,
but difficult to keep you.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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Washington State
1 posted 2001-04-23 08:31 PM


Yes, life does interfere.  but He is always near waiting.  Very nice thoughtful poem.  Joyce
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
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2 posted 2001-04-24 01:06 AM


Even on this subject...we seem to agree.
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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3 posted 2001-04-24 07:32 PM


I enjoyed your poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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4 posted 2001-04-25 10:55 AM


You say it very well. We do get caught in our thoughts and slip into mindless things sometimes. Or just plain bogged down in the worries of things we must do.
But... it's wonderful to know he is right by our side, and all we have to do is call on him. He'll be right there, ever faithful friend that he is.
Good poem and I can see it's straight from the heart.

Deb

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