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April Showers of Grace - Haikus |
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
The April showers fall softly on verdant earth awakening Spring As Your Grace descends to bring new Life to my soul awakening Love A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What a masterful comparison you write here, Ellie! It is beautiful, and heart-warming. To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
God was so wise to bring Easter to us in the spring. Joyce |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ah, excellently done! Your talent with Haiku/Senryu and Tanka is truly admirable, as one such as I who loves these formats and uses them so often. It is a constant thrill to see the title of one of your posts accompanied by the name of one of these formats. Very few people can write them quite like you do. These two are truly no exception. Maybe someday you and I can do a Renga? ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Reading your posts, I feel God's grace raining! Thank you, Rae |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
These two compliment each other so eloquently yet modestly. Very good job. Stephen. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
May I join this august host in saying your graceful-april hiakus are a delight to the soul. David No Better Place do I know God Bless us All!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ Just lovely, as always. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very well done! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Ellie, As April showers bring new life, God's grace has brought new love into your heart. This was I believe a wonderful testimony that I enjoyed reading. Bob <>< |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superb! |
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