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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 04-05-2001 02:18 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob


Shark Bait

Dark
Deep
Translucent
Bog
Concave
Absorbent
Like a black hole
No light
Reflection
Obtuse
Stare
Is to look
into the eye
of Hell
Gnashing
Teeth rip
Swirling Violently
Engaged
with Angry
Pursuit
  Blood scent
Excruciates
Decapitated
Torso
Swallowed
Whole
as Lifeless
Remains
Float to surface
Dead
...and so are we
in Satan's grip.

-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-


[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 04-05-2001).]

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WhtDove
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1 posted 04-06-2001 10:13 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What an impact! You've brought this one in a whole different light.  

inot2B
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2 posted 04-06-2001 03:14 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

HOW TRUE!!!!!!!!!
Lighthousebob
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3 posted 04-06-2001 08:52 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Thank you White Dove and I not to be......

Bob <><

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4 posted 04-07-2001 02:53 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Er... quite powerful, not what I'm used to reading in Spiritual.  This one was a bit more negative than some... but this was a nice change, nonetheless.  
I think the format was quite original.  Good job, Bob.  
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

sandgrain
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5 posted 04-07-2001 06:23 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Wow, thought for a moment I was watching a gory movie!   Seriously, it is so like a shark bite or Satan's snare, as one is taken in more and more and more.  Very good!
  Rae

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Songbird
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6 posted 04-08-2001 01:41 AM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

How true..good analogy..
kcsgrandma
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7 posted 04-09-2001 12:37 AM       View Profile for kcsgrandma   Email kcsgrandma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit kcsgrandma's Home Page   View IP for kcsgrandma

What a chilling and gripping reminder.  Well done!

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

pyre
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8 posted 02-21-2010 10:15 PM       View Profile for pyre   Email pyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pyre

yeah, i just got to this after you responded to my piece "Wall of Damnation."  And this is very nice.  Very graphic and bloody, yet reasonably Alfred Hitchcock in a sense.

-pyre

Does she pray, or am I prey?  

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