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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Shark Bait Dark Deep Translucent Bog Concave Absorbent Like a black hole No light Reflection Obtuse Stare Is to look into the eye of Hell Gnashing Teeth rip Swirling Violently Engaged with Angry Pursuit Blood scent Excruciates Decapitated Torso Swallowed Whole as Lifeless Remains Float to surface Dead ...and so are we in Satan's grip. -Robert E. Michaud Jr.- [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 04-05-2001).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What an impact! You've brought this one in a whole different light.  |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
HOW TRUE!!!!!!!!! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Thank you White Dove and I not to be...... Bob <>< [This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 04-06-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Er... quite powerful, not what I'm used to reading in Spiritual. This one was a bit more negative than some... but this was a nice change, nonetheless. I think the format was quite original. Good job, Bob. ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Wow, thought for a moment I was watching a gory movie! Seriously, it is so like a shark bite or Satan's snare, as one is taken in more and more and more. Very good!Rae [This message has been edited by sandgrain (edited 04-07-2001).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
How true..good analogy.. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
What a chilling and gripping reminder. Well done! To love another person is to see the face of God. |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
yeah, i just got to this after you responded to my piece "Wall of Damnation." And this is very nice. Very graphic and bloody, yet reasonably Alfred Hitchcock in a sense. -pyre Does she pray, or am I prey? |
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