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My Humble Limerick

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

0 posted 2001-04-04 01:21 PM

My life is what I bring
To You my Savior King.
On bended knee,
I give You me.
And this the song I sing.

By Joyce 4/4/2001

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

1 posted 2001-04-04 05:45 PM

This is wonderful, Joyce

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 2001-04-04 09:54 PM

It's amazing what kind of meaning we can fit into such short space isn't it?

Well done. I think I'm going to have to try my hand at this all ready.

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

3 posted 2001-04-07 05:36 PM

Joyce, this is great! Thanks.
Rae

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-07 05:47 PM

Very cute! I think you strayed a bit from the traditional take on this, from a narrative sense to an almost addressive sense. It suited the form very well!
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2001-04-07 06:45 PM

Well done Joyce.

Betty Lou Hebert

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