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VAS
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0 posted 2001-04-02 12:05 PM



The Uncloaked
Virginia Salter

In humbleness, full humility,
He entered the city after having
wept for its future, past
and present.
Though shod in sandals,
on a donkey, robed as mere peasant,
He was hailed as King,
rejoicing, praising,
carpeted with the cloaks of
His believers

The uncloaked ones
crying out, “Crucify”
forgetting reverence, adoration.
Amnesiacs betraying their Loved One
divorcing their unity
turning faces away
disavowing vows
inhabiting full weakness
more profoundly than ever before

He, in His strength,
held His tongue
folded His hands
and gave His all
drinking the cup of death
to life eternal
for those,
though uncloaked before him,
believe and receive
His love, His gift.

©April 2, 2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2001-04-02 12:45 PM


This is ;poignant and stirring VAS.  This Easter season is so humbling.  Joyce
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2 posted 2001-04-02 01:45 PM


Your words are so vividly descripive!  We need to be reminded constantly of His life of love.   Thank you.
    Rae

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3 posted 2001-04-02 01:48 PM


VAS:  Wonderful and brought many images to mind of things we need to always remember.  

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-04-02 08:22 PM


Oh, this hit a personal spot with me... for that reason I'll have to applaud you on this poem.  It's rare that I have such a profound impact made by one reading...
~Allan

The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further"

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