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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Unchained Beauty ~*~ In the heart of the forest shadows sleep on the edge of cool waters as the sky unfolds opening the windows of heaven the breath of God stirs a kiss of gold in the misty morn where butterflies flutter their gossamer wings sprinkling dew upon wildflowers hummingbirds awaken to tender music in the air as the rhythm intensifies angel wings rush by painting passion upon new flowers once dead an unchained dance of beauty embraces another day. BloomingRose |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was stunningly beautiful! Excellent imagery to describe the dawning of a new day. Wow! What a beautiful picture to wake up to. Please submit this one to the main site.  Just awesome! <*\\\>< |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You've penned such a nice way to awake and embrace the beauty of another day. Melton |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is really beautiful.And some would tell us this all came by chance. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
What a lovely picture you've painted with your words. Betty Lou Hebert |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You have just made my day ever so beautiful by waking up to this most wondrous scene of God's glory in creation! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I like it.... a lot. You organized the thought well and expressed the situation beautifully. Such simplicity in the wonders of nature about... this is truly a magnificent piece. I'll second WhtDove in that you should submit this! ~Allan Its rather handy being at the top of the food chain...you can sort things out and not get the blame for it. ~~Elizabeth Johnson (anonymousfemale) |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Oh my, I nearly missed this beauty! "Beauty" is an understatement. It's magnificent in every way. Thank you for sharing this. Rae |
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Stephanos
since 2000-07-31
Posts 3618Statesboro, GA, USA |
Very well done! This one flowed with "unchained beauty". Stephen. |
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robin-shep Junior Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 28northern California, USA |
I am impressed, too. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Blooming Rose, The beauty of morning just glows on the screen with this very picturesque poem. Very nicely written. Bob <>< |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is an outstanding nature poem in my opinion! Kathleen Blake |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
whtdove~ Thank you so much. I have been meaning to get back to this world of poetry before now to thank you all, but have been very busy lately. Looking forward to some extra time soon. Again, I thank you for your nice comment. Melton~ Thank you, I am so glad you like this. Joyce~ We know it's all in God's plan and no accident. Thank you Betty~ So glad you enjoy the beauty of God's creation too. Thank you for reading ellie~ Thank you my kindhearted friend Allan~ Your kind words are appreciated much. Thank you. Rae~ So glad you like Stephen~ Thank you very much! robin~ Thank you Bob~ Morning is my favorite time of day. So much peace and joy. Kathleen~ I do appreciate your kind words. Coming from someone as gifted as you means a lot. Thank you |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is a gem, so beautiful, what a thought! Into my library this goes~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ This is so convincingly YOU ! Lovely, lady ! 'the breath of God stirs a kiss of gold in the misty morn' Exactly ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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