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jbaker
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since 2001-02-16
Posts 74
Australia

0 posted 2001-03-03 06:34 PM


St Peter, St Peter may I
wait by the gates of heaven.
For I am not scheduled to die
until a quarter past eleven.

St Peter, St Peter may I
open the gates of heaven.
To let others pass by
as it is only ten to seven.

St Peter, St Peter may I
lock the gates of heaven.
As my family they will cry
at my untimely leaving.

St Peter, St Peter may I
freeze the gates of heaven.
As I am wondering why
He wants me when my life is uneven.

St Peter, St Peter may I
not enter the gates of heaven.
Until all the stars in the sky
have vanished forever.

St Peter, St Peter may I
be forgiven.
For I am not yet ready to fly
to the gates of heaven.

[This message has been edited by jbaker (edited 03-03-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Jocelyn Baker - All Rights Reserved
LoveAll
Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 148
B'dale, USA
1 posted 2001-03-03 07:30 PM


wow....I love this! IT IS SO AWESOME! It is great...flows perfectly. I love it!
God Bless and Keep Smiling
Stacey

The only thing that counts is faith expressing itself through love. ~Gal. 5:6

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-03-03 08:18 PM


Jos; This so unique and flows, to me, like an old New Orleans Jazz spiritual..Wonderful!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2001-03-03 10:24 PM


JOS,
I do love the unique style and treatment that you give to your writtings. This one is different, and honest, and somewhat thought provoking, thank you for sharing it here, and keep on writting!!!
Your Friend, David


No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
4 posted 2001-03-05 08:35 AM


What a great piece jb~ Have to agree with Ellie, could almost hear it being sung... Wonderful!!! Bonnie
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