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Jeremy Redinger
Junior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 46


0 posted 2001-02-27 05:56 PM


Before I post this one, I just want to say that I'm fine and this is one of those poems you really don't want to read into to try and understand me.
I just want you to take it for what it is... A poem that expresses a rather dark side that many people hold deep inside.


Child Of Evil


The molten scent of heavens fire
Lends my heart to swoon desire.
Painful lost and painful wept,
She need not know where I have slept.

Hate and fear and holy ashes
Scorch the ground beneath the masses.
I've slain thy word oh god of good,
I care not if you've understood.

The word of light the word of day,
There's nothing more that you could say.
He calls for me, I bid farewell;
My dark of heart shall shriek in hell.




[This message has been edited by Jeremy Redinger (edited 02-27-2001).]

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Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2001-03-01 11:05 PM


Jeremy,

Welcome.... This is great expression
and I must say, like you have stated,
I have these held in emotions that need
release myself. I do not completely
understand them either, but they do
exist. You have inspired me to write
a little of myself.... expression is very
good and comforting for our souls....
Thank you for your inspiration.

This sounds like war and war is Hell
where angels weep and demons dwell
in what's undrstood I cannot tell
from whence my bleeading heart has fell.

Bob <><

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