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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-02-17 08:39 PM



I close my eyes, and I feel a tear.
I see you at the cross, dying for
our faults. Surrounded by pain,
in all your glory. Mighty, powerful,
yet so weak. At the mercy of our destiny.
Physically anguished, eternally begotten.
At your feet, lies all our sins.
I closed my eyes and I feel a tear
for my humanity.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-02-17 08:47 PM


I look for you on here...and this is why!!
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2001-02-18 09:06 AM


Walker, this is a truly beautiful poem of perfect humility.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
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3 posted 2001-02-18 12:21 PM


A beautifully humble and inspiring piece of work here Walker~ I look forward to reading more. Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
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4 posted 2001-02-19 02:48 PM


walker,

it's ok, after all...
Jesus wept.

Bob <><

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