Thou Art My Starshine - Tanka

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Thou Art My Starshine - Tanka

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2001-01-11 09:09 PM

I reached for a star
but found inside my own heart
Thy bright shining light
Lord You are the bright North Star
that shines on my path the way

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A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 01-11-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-01-12 12:54 PM

There could never be any star brighter. This was a lovely Tanka and once again I commend you on your excellence at penning so much in so few lines. You seem to have mastered these wonderfully. I will be looking for more from you.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2001-01-12 08:56 AM

ellie you are blessed with a gift for writing wonderful poetry for HIM.
Love this one.
Deb

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2001-01-13 03:13 PM

I agree that you do have a lovely spirit that shines from deep within your heart that not only leads yourself but others along the way. God Bless You, Bob <><

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

4 posted 2001-01-14 02:49 PM

Ellie,
You use the tools and forms of poetry for praise so aptly! Clearly your heart knows of what you speak! You bless us with your words of Praise!
Dennis :^)

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