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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-10 03:51 PM


Will You Come In

it is easy enough
the door is open
come right on it
we deal in coping

see the light in
the window for you
it shadows sin
lets the goodness in

you don't have
to say a word
come in softly
you'll be heard

and if you come in
you'll be held the day
in angel's wings
in a most gentle way

you might cry
be sad and sigh
He shall hear you
on the High

or you may smile
with joy filled heart
just come in, and
of love impart

Will you come in?
You know you can ~
for you are a part
of God's great plan.



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-12-10 05:22 PM


i always have such a nice warm feeling in this forum...enjoyed reading the warmth of your poem..HUGS

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


BSC
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2 posted 2000-12-10 07:51 PM


I feel as though I've been hugged Karilea ~ such a tender, lovely piece...Thank you.  Bonnie
merlynh
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3 posted 2000-12-11 01:26 AM


I felt comfort, thank you;.
fractal007
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4 posted 2000-12-12 04:28 AM


Nice!  I like this one alot.  This speaks volumes of God's lovingkindness.  Thankyou for sharing this!
ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-12-12 04:30 AM


Wonderful loving words ...so true of our loving God!

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-12-14 11:33 PM


Thank you all...the door continues to stay open and welcoming all...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-12-15 10:04 AM


That is one door that will never be locked.  Beautiful write my friend.  I really enjoyed reading this.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2000-12-16 10:05 PM


Sunshine,

Well said.  The choice is ours to make.  He shall leave the door open, but we have to enter in.  Nice writing.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

deleeme
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9 posted 2000-12-18 06:19 PM


Such tender hominess- so warm and embracing, so loving and encouraging!  Your word speak well of Heaven's open-house & open door policy, for those who will accept the invitation-"for whosoever will" of a Divine Home life.  Thank You Karilea for your tenderly touching poem here.   David
LoveAll
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10 posted 2000-12-18 09:13 PM


I love this!  This is what I pray that some of my friends come to see...the joy that comes from entering through that door.  Wonderfully written!  Have a wonderful Christmas!
God Bless and Keep Smiling  

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-12-24 09:56 PM


Thank you all...I am "gifting" this to a friend this evening...if he follows the link, he may find what I see...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2000-12-24 10:09 PM


Karilea,
With the key of love there is no door you can't get in. *L*

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
13 posted 2000-12-25 08:00 PM


This makes me feel better about myself. A lovely read it is.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
14 posted 2000-12-29 09:55 AM


Karilea this is like a warm hug.

A very welcome warm hug this morning  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Suzanne Arlene
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15 posted 2000-12-30 08:45 AM


It is a very comforting poem  Thank you Suzanne
sandgrain
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16 posted 2000-12-30 04:35 PM


I just made a response to one saying  this is the only place I know where the Christmas spirit (love) seems to shine all year long.  Your post is evidence.  Thank you.   Rae
Lighthousebob
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17 posted 2000-12-30 06:46 PM


Thanks for the hospitality... I do believe that I will come and sit a spell... say, do you mind if I stay...  I do believe that I would like to remain in His presence forever.

A lovely poem....   Bob <><  

CitiZen-One
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18 posted 2000-12-31 12:18 PM


Yes each of us a small reflection of God, we must know and complete ourselves. We are all in his great plan, all a part of his great mystery.
2dalimit
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19 posted 2000-12-31 12:50 PM


You have captured GOD's invitation so elegantly. You are a good messenger.
Melton

Sunshine
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20 posted 2001-01-03 02:12 PM


Ah...look at all of the WELCOME faces...

hugs to you all...

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