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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-02 03:39 PM


Overhead gray clouds
one lone circle opens up
light touches God's earth

Stream of light comes down
one lone ray of slender shaft
God's finger shines forth

In the gleam of light
slender beam toward heaven
so shall I go Home




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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1 posted 2000-12-02 04:52 PM


His brightest Light shines
radiating from the hearts
aflame with His Love

Karilea; Iloved how you inspired me so much, as you can see.    love, Ellie

Belief is a truth held in the mind; faith is a fire in the heart.

Joseph Fort Newton



deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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2 posted 2000-12-03 06:46 AM


This is a beautiful piece Sunshine,  I feel warmed by the Love of the Singular & Divine Light as I am reminded of it in your worthy work.
  Thank You,   David

To put together words & rhyme--and touch a life--is so sublime! Thank God for such precious contact! (D.L.White)



Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-12-03 10:20 PM


Ellie, David, thank you for taking the time to read...it was such a lovely sight...I just had to share...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




BSC
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4 posted 2000-12-05 08:11 AM


Ah Karilea ~ What a beautiful image these lovely words have created... Every line... just beautiful!  Bonnie
Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-12-07 11:32 PM


Bonnie, thank you...this was a picture I hoped to portray to many...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




gidget7
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since 2000-08-12
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Arkansas, USA
6 posted 2000-12-08 12:34 PM


Oh that I could find the words to do this justice ! It is amazing, I long for the day that I too get to travel "Air Jesus" !! Thank you so much, lifted my spirit in a time I was weak.
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