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Allstaria22
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2000-11-11 08:25 PM


Out of all my friends
I am the only one
the same for my family
where I work
where I play
in a world so advanced I am a rarity
sometimes I stand alone
with laughs
and jokes
taunting
sometimes I stand in a group
and one by one we fall
He is my strength
when this world
makes me weak
He reminds me of my promises
He reminds me of why
I am proud to be a virgin.



Isaiah 1:18

"Everybody loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?" -All Together Seperate

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Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2000-11-12 11:31 AM


God Bless you. You keep on shining like a diamond!
BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
2 posted 2000-11-12 03:45 PM


The Lord will bless you for your faithfulness. Be proud of who you are!
I am proud to see you take a stand.
Hugs,
Deb

dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
3 posted 2000-11-12 06:59 PM


I didn't know what to make of this at first, the I hit the end, and indeed, a rarity, one that should make you feel proud and strong.
I must applaud you for this.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-11-12 11:01 PM


I'm right behind dragonpoe, applauding too!

He is our strength when the world makes us weak, and I'm glad you draw on that strength.
This is something to be proud of!!  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

MySisterMegan
New Member
since 2000-11-10
Posts 8

5 posted 2000-11-19 11:05 PM


'sometimes I stand in a group
and one by one we fall'


I like how here you put 'we' instead of 'they' shows that you know your own weaknesses. Makes you seem more human.
I hope eyou comtinue to use God as your strength.

mf



'In my eyes I see a blur of things that others see so clearly'

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
6 posted 2000-11-19 11:33 PM


  I must say that you got my attention and I had to read your reference scripture and I think that Isaiah 1:18 explains it all very well... to be white as snow.  Beautiful.  Bob <><
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