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Allstaria22
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA

0 posted 2000-11-08 03:36 PM


for the snow that fell today
for the coat I could put on and the pink and warm gloves
for the roof that no longer leaks and the sink that no longer smells
for the water that runs warm or cold but clean
for the blanket that covers the drafty door
for the dollar that allowed me to buy seven meals of noodles
for the kitty that warms me in my sleep
for the brother who respects me and grows closer to You
for the mother who worked so hard all alone to show me love
for replacing the father i no longer know
for the moment I got to know my sister and for the knowledge that I will see her again
for the car that sometimes runs and the legs that carry me when it doesn't
for the hands that are craked and ugly but whole so I can thank You with my words
for the book that helps me learn and draws me closer to You
for the one and only perfect man who died for me before I was even born so that one day I could run to You and thank You with a hug.

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Isaiah 1:18
"Everyone loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?"


[This message has been edited by Allstaria22 (edited 11-08-2000).]

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-11-08 07:30 PM


Thank you for this beautiful poem! I loved it! All the little things and the big ones too, but most of all for His love. Ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-11-08 09:11 PM


I read your heart in every line! Especially liked the hug part!!!  
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-11-08 09:29 PM


How heartfelt and humble this is!
What praise to God and total thankfulness.
WOW! Thanks for putting this down and sharing it with everyone. I love it!  

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
4 posted 2000-11-09 04:25 AM


This is Beautiful, and offered in the true spirit of Loving Gratitude--Very Good, and
God Bless you in All your Blessings,  David

WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



MySisterMegan
New Member
since 2000-11-10
Posts 8

5 posted 2000-11-10 11:38 PM


Your optomisim is enchanting. I wish I could look at my roof and be thank ful that it no longer leaks, all I see is a water stain that is dirty and needs to be fixed, when my car doesn't start I am put out and will sit and wait for a ride. Never change your love for your God. It is reasureing.

MF


'In my eyes I see a blur of things that others see so clearly'

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
6 posted 2000-11-14 08:45 AM


"So that one day I could run to You and thank you with a hug"... Oh what a great image this brings to mind.  This is perfect Allstaria, reminding us to be thankful for everything, big and small that we so often take for granted.  Love it.  Bonnie
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