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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois

0 posted 2000-11-04 11:58 PM


My soul is lost within me
The flesh now in control
I'm trying hard to fight it
But there's none who can console

The world has taken over
Both the spirit and the mind
The harder I try to fight it
The harder it is to find

Though the eyes are seeing
The spirit won't conform
Seems it won't take control
To overcome this storm

The eyes are growing weary
The spirit has gone blind
Lord please lift me from the pit
Your love once more to find

Bring me from this awful sleep
Bring my soul back to awake
Lord there's so much riding here
My soul is what's at stake

Each day that passes by me
I'm drifting farther away
Lord it's not where I wanna be
It's not where I wanna stay

Once again I am in need
Of your awesome loving grace
To guide me and protect me
With each new day I face



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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-11-05 12:36 PM


Becky, who among us has not been in this spot. This is a heartrending poem. I just say "let go, let God". Give it all to Him. It will work out.
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-11-05 08:48 AM


Aw, Becky, I know this place well. The only mistake I ever make is to forget that He is right there waiting with all the Grace and Love we need. I get so mired in my own thinking, that I forget He will change everthing in a hearbeat if we will but look away from our own distractions and focus on His loving eyes!  Love you, Ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-11-05 05:09 PM


Hi Becky,
  You write such beautiful poetry. You put your heart and soul in this piece and it touches my essence-my soul. PoetDV & Ellie are right and you are grounded in Him, that will see you through. I love you.  Marcy


[This message has been edited by Alle'cram (edited 11-05-2000).]

BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
4 posted 2000-11-05 05:45 PM


Whtdove~ I believe we all suffer in that same mode at one time or other. When the holy spirit nudges us home, we have to learn to surrender. It's not an easy place to be, that valley, but his  hand is always there to gently pull us out of the rut.
Hugs,
Deb

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-11-05 07:56 PM


White Dove,

Remember, what you choose to do with the trials He gives you is what will make you stronger.  With His guidance, you will see it through . . . just have faith.  Nice work.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
6 posted 2000-11-06 10:05 AM


This post is so touching and I want to cry for you.  Yes,it seems we get so on fire for our Lord, we can't imagine forgetting or being without Him.  Then we feel so very guilty when we find we're like Peter when his humanity took over from time to time, even though he truly loved Christ.  We must admit it, ask for help and go on.  Love, hugs and prayers.  
Mom

BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
7 posted 2000-11-07 08:42 AM


Oh Becky, How many times through the years should I have read this beautiful poem... He'll take whatever we give Him, the hardest part is letting Him..... This is just such a heartfelt piece.  Bonnie
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-11-07 10:09 PM


Thank you all so much!
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