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Suzanne Arlene
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-01 07:25 AM



Come dance with me,
let your spirit fly.
Ignite your passion,
Lifes passing  you by.

Feel the breath of the angels,
lightly caressing your skin.
Breathing life into your soul,
and your awakening within.

Come dance with me,
and we will soar together.
Twirling and spiralling,
spinning forever.

We can hide  in  the secret place,
the one deep inside.
Where the only thing that matters
Is just  you and I.

Come dance with me
the wind calls our names.
It is beckoning us near
Our hearts to inflame


© Copyright 2000 Suzanne Arlene - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-11-01 08:46 AM


Just God and you...what a Spiritual Journey!  Welcome to Passions!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
2 posted 2000-11-01 08:48 AM


Welcome Suzanne ~ What a beautiful entrance...a delightful dance, to be sure.  Bonnie
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-11-01 12:37 PM


Hi Suzanne,
  I really like this because it shows the intimacy, a personal realationship with Jesus.
Thank you and beautifully written.  Marcy

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-11-02 11:47 AM


Welcome to Spiritual!

I love it!

Feel the breath of the angels,
lightly caressing your skin.
Breathing life into your soul,
and your awakening within.

Very beautifully written, and delicate! Great work!


<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

bestgirl911
Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551
Clio, MI , United We Stand
5 posted 2000-11-02 12:51 PM


This is wonderful ...I Love it...This was my first read in Spiritual..and what a beginning. Thanks

Best

Suzanne Arlene
Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2000-11-02 01:48 PM


Thank you everyone for your kind comments. Come Dance With Me is my favorite poem . It expresses how i feel about life and recieving joy from my world around me.Everyone here is just wonderful and i am having a great time reading everyone's poems.Thank You again Suzanne
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
7 posted 2000-11-03 07:34 AM


Dear Suzanne; Welcome and thank you for sharing this most glorious poem. Inside of us is where He dwells, if we will but open our hearts to His Love, as you so beautifully have.  Love, ellie

le coeur a ses raisons que la raison ne con-nait point....the heart has its reasons that reason knows nothing of..



Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
8 posted 2000-11-04 03:26 AM


tap...
           tap....

Mind if I have the next dance?

Bob <><

...and Welcome to "Passions."

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
9 posted 2000-11-04 06:02 PM


This is so sweet! I love the tenderness in your words.
Deb  

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 2001-02-12 01:17 AM


This is a wonderful piece.....lovely!!!!

Bridgette  


Strangers
Nobody knows we love
I catch your eyes in the dark
One look relives the memory
Remember me
The way I used to be

-Robert Smith -

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
11 posted 2001-02-12 01:22 PM


In the secret quiet place, he is there.
There is nothing like being in the presence of the Lord. Had to come back to read again.
Love the poem, hope to read more from you.
Deb



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LoveAll
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 148
B'dale, USA
12 posted 2001-02-12 09:04 PM


This is truely amazing!  This swept me off my feet.  You captured the wonder and grace of this poem...I LOVE IT!
God Bless and Keep Smiling  
Stacey

The only thing that counts is faith expressing itself through love. ~Gal. 5:6

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

13 posted 2001-02-14 08:40 AM


Welcome, this is sooo original...

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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