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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song

0 posted 2000-10-14 10:12 AM


Cast not hatred's stone
lest you be sin free yourself
accept me as is

~~*~~

Temptation goes wild
among words and voices heard
purity comes hard

~~*~~

Challenge of one's needs
for strength and trust in the lord
I am worth effort

~~*~~

Put forth the effort
without temptations dangles
and strength will be found


Mark Bohannan

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-10-14 11:50 AM


GREAT job, Mark! ...and may your verses speak for me, also...so worthy and wise are your lovely poems, can't seem to pick a favorite, I love them all!  Marcy
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2000-10-14 03:44 PM


~~*~~

Strength without recourse
except from One who accepts
me just as I am...

~~*~~

                                               Of course I loved them all... Bob <><

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-10-14 11:22 PM


Love that first one!

Great job with them all Mark!  

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-10-14 11:31 PM


May you be Blessed, Mark
here we love you as you are
just as Jesus does!

You Haiku are beautiful, and so inspiring too!  Ellie


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-10-15 01:06 PM


Very good, Mark! I've been wanting to do one of these for some time now....seems to be beyond my ability...but I'll keep trying!

Denise

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
6 posted 2000-10-15 01:58 PM


Mark~ Cast not hatred's stone... true we are not to be the first to throw the stone, but to thrive to be an example in love.
As for temptations in our walk in life, we all as humans feel the desire to go that step, but we must do whatever we can to avoid those things, in order to secure that safe walk with God.
Strength to avoid the things that seem to be a stumbling block can only come from God. I myself need that touch daily from the one that can help me.I am but a weak vessel.
I have to say this is very moving to read.
Deb



Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-10-16 07:46 AM


Thank you all so very much.  These have special meaning to me and I am glad that you took the time to read them and that you enjoyed them.
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
8 posted 2000-10-16 01:37 PM


Each of these are precious renderings.  I'm trying to memorize them to help me in both my walk and writing.  Thank you, Mark.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2000-10-16 02:24 PM


Should we live our life
to find strength in all concerns
focus on the light


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
10 posted 2000-10-16 09:42 PM


Just thought I would pop into this forum and was pleasantly surprised to see this wonderful post!!!  

Great job Mark!  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley



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11 posted 2000-10-16 09:43 PM


Mark~
These are wonderfully inspirational.
Thanks for sharing them.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
12 posted 2000-10-17 02:43 AM


a sandgrain-It is I who not only thank you for reading but for finding my poems worthy of your effort to memorize them and I truely pray that they do help you in your walk.  

Karilea-EXACTLY....it shall guide us.

Marina-And I am pleasantly surprised to see your lovely words here.  Thank you my friend.

Marge-Thank you from the bottom of my heart.  You know your smiles make me even wider than I normally would

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
13 posted 2000-10-17 09:08 AM


Wow Mark!!! Wonderful gems of inspiration.  Bonnie
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
14 posted 2000-10-18 01:46 PM



Mark-
   give up on you, my friend? ...never!  
   these are wonderful...some important
   reminders in these words.  thanks for
   sharing them.  

   ((((hugs)))),
      -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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