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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-09-19 08:47 AM


sweet feel of God's tears
fall gently, soft, kiss my face
gentle rain embraced



Karilea
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1 posted 2000-09-19 09:57 AM


My, my Karilea, such a tender little piece.  Could almost feel those sweet tears.  Bonnie
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2 posted 2000-09-19 11:39 AM


Thank you Bonnie...
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3 posted 2000-09-19 01:10 PM


Just to think of God's tears as being so soft and gentle...coming from a God who is so strong and mighty expresses the wide expanse of God's character so beautifully. I've often thought of the rain as God's tears and the rainbow as God's smile... It is wonderful that you have been touched by God's tears in such a way as this... Bob <><
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-09-19 06:14 PM


Ah, Karilea: This is a heavenly Haiku! Truly a work of praise and wonder. Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-09-19 08:21 PM


Beautiful and tender words. The words really touched my heart.

Deb

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-09-21 08:54 PM


*sniff sniff*  Just kidding!  This was a good one Karilea!
Alle'cram
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7 posted 2000-09-21 10:12 PM


Sunshine,
  So heavenly and touches sweetly & deeply.

Honeybee
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8 posted 2000-09-22 07:18 PM



What a beautiful haiku, I also like to think of the rain as God's tears    You are like sunshine to my soul with your poems

God's tears of joy fall
softly upon my window pane
sweet heavenly rain

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


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Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-09-22 08:41 PM


Aren't Haikus fun?  So much that we can say, with so few words...thank you all for your lovely comments...
Dennis L. White
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10 posted 2000-09-22 08:46 PM


Sunshine,
  You shed light on the gentle, tender nature of our loving God. Nice Haiku!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


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11 posted 2000-09-22 09:02 PM


This one was sweet and precious, like the dew
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12 posted 2000-09-23 11:52 PM


Karilea~
This is just so lovely.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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vlraynes
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13 posted 2000-09-23 11:58 PM



karilea-
   this is just beautiful.  i love the rain
   and this just makes it that much more
   special.  thanks for this.  

   -vicky



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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 2000-09-24 09:19 PM


Heaven's tears quenching
forgiving grace now bestowed
as one walks within


Sunshine
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15 posted 2000-09-25 12:20 PM


Dennis, Citizen, so good to see you both here...

Marge, you're just so lovely...

vicky, then it is special for both of us, thank you for reading...

Mark, what a lovely addition...I would like to see this as its own post...the rest of the members here would enjoy it so...

thank you all...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


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