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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-09-12 09:01 PM


Choose Now


A vortex of tunnel winds pull me in
black as a moonless night
down I tumbled through this endless hole
I swallowed hard to wake from this dream
with open mouth, I tried to scream

I hear myself repeat a once rehearsed verse
Yeah tho I walk through the valley of the shadow of death
I will fear no evil, for thou art with me

The light I see gently calls to me
love engulfs the very core of me
go back for a while, have no fear

choose me now for the time is near...

~BloomingRose~




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deleeme
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1 posted 2000-09-12 09:15 PM


B.Rose,
  I like the contrast here of Fears decent and Faith's call to the guiding light- in these words you have pictured the spiritual journey of which we all are given and offer us the choice we all need to choose.  Thank you,  David


WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-09-12 09:39 PM


David,
I know the time is drawing near.
Narrow is the road to salvation, but wide is the path to destruction.
I hope many will hear the call before its too late.

Deb

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3 posted 2000-09-12 10:41 PM


BloomingRose~

One voice that calls to us all
That gives us the choice
to rise
or to fall
Pause to hear
of Eternal choice
found in the gentleness
of God's sweet voice
The light of His love
shines for all today
showing us that Eternal Life
is a heartbeat away


*Oh, my ... you certainly stirred
the inspiration in my heart with your
lovely, lovely thoughts.

You have taken the hand of a friend and
shared His voice with them.
I thank you.
~*Marge*~




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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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4 posted 2000-09-12 11:42 PM


Rose,
  So well written and with gentleness you have spoken truth. I agree, the time is near, one way or another. Keep looking up!
Love, Marcy  

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-09-13 08:10 AM


Rose; How wonderfully you have penned the eternal truth, that God gives us the power to choose His Love every day. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2000-09-13 08:59 AM


Marge,
One voice! I like that.
Deb

WhtDove
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7 posted 2000-09-14 11:12 AM


I saw this very closely to those who have experienced life after death.

It's so simple once you learn what this life is all about, but because it's so simple, tends to be overlooked.

ONE big choice...I choose HIM!

Well written!

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2000-09-14 08:28 PM


Marcy, True, watch and pray!

Ellie, Yes God gives us the choice.

WhtDove, You got it! It was drawn from the life after death experiance, and the chance to choose.

I also choose him to the end!  Or, I should say, till we meet again... forever and amen!


Lighthousebob
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9 posted 2000-09-15 05:32 PM


Speaking from experience, Sometimes you need to face death in order to gain life.  You need to experience a miracle in your life to be blessed with the gift of miracles... You can't give something that you don't have.
Thank God you have Life!  God Bless You, Bob <><

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