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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
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Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-09-11 08:53 PM


the depth of His love
simply amazing to me
by His grace, I'm free

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precious is the life
that was given up for me
His love is supreme

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He whispers to me
fear not the unknown my child
you're never alone

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Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-09-11 09:04 PM


Lone Wolf,
  Each one a jewel! With so few words, so much is said. Wonderful job and my favorite is... (and this is hard)...me thinks no. three. Loved them all!     Love, Marcy

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-09-12 07:41 AM


Lone Wolf; These little gems are superb! So beutifully said and wonderfully inspiring.
Lovely works here. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
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3 posted 2000-09-12 08:25 AM


Three little beauties LW....Simplicity at its finest!  Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2000-09-12 04:33 PM


Three very true statements about our Lord:  He is ever loving, ever sacrificing, and ever present...  These are wonderful reminders of our Lord.  Thank You for sharing these 3 haikus, Bob <><
Sven
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5 posted 2000-09-12 07:33 PM


I can see that you're learning to stretch yourself LW. . . good job. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-09-12 09:32 PM


Lone wolf(who is never alone,haiku #3),
  t5his are all beautiful expressions of faith and truth written in the brief haiku style- you've done very well with these! David


WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
7 posted 2000-09-14 11:05 AM


I love these little things. So much said in such little wording.

You've done an excellent job!

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2000-09-14 07:43 PM



All three haikus are beautiful gems!  Well said and so very true!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2000-09-16 03:10 PM


LoneWolf~

Within your heart reigns
The essence of faith in Him
Shared with each of us


Enlightening Senryu's, my friend.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
10 posted 2000-09-18 11:18 PM


Marcy . . .You never have to choose just one!!  LOL.  Thank you very much for the reply.  

Ellie . . .Thank you, I thought I would try something different.  I just love reading here in Spiritual.

BSC . . . Sometimes all we need are a few words to express it all.  Thanks!!

Bob . . . You are welcome and thank you for getting my point exactly.  He is all that and so much more.  

Sven . . . Thank you my friend.  I have to admit you kind of inspired me with your haiku in open.     Thanks to you!!

David . . . Thank you very much.  And no, I am never truly alone . . . none of us really are.

White Dove . . . I love them too.  Fun to write.  Thank you!!

Melissa . . .Welcome back!!  Thank you my friend.  

Marge . . . Awwww, thank you so much for the haiku.  it is beautiful my friend.  I am discovering my faith runs deeper than I thought.  



Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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