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Stairways (Senyru)

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

0 posted 2000-09-07 12:23 PM

Stairways (Senyru)

Joy, Unspeakable
when the last step, we shall take
look upon His face

~~~

Keep climbing higher
rewards are eternal life
keep the faith til then

~~~

Stariway to heaven
in dreams and reality
a new life with God

My first try at writing Senyru's. I'm open for coaching tips.

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

1 posted 2000-09-07 01:46 PM

These are simply beautiful Marcy, doesn't seem to me that any coaching whatsoever is needed. Such simple words that hold such great meaning. Wonderful job! Bonnie

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-09-07 04:56 PM

These are well done, very enjoyable. I love them!! Thanks for sharing

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite

since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-09-07 05:46 PM

Marcy: Beautiful Senyru, Beautiful praises to God! No lessons needed when there is perfection! love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

juliet_2u
Senior Member

since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-09-08 09:14 AM

Marcy these are so lovely. Oh the day that we finally see Him face to face.
Love ya,
Juls

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 2000-09-08 08:31 PM

Marcy these were most delightful! Unspeakable joy is such the right term to use. Thanks Marcy, you've brought vision in my mind, and smiles right along with them.

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