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Lil OnE
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since 1999-12-14
Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 2000-08-29 03:53 PM


I am sunken in a deep, dark abyss.
At the bottom, if there is one,
there is a place where I can stand firmly
for the first time in my life.

He has gone on before me.
I stood where He stood.
The blood was shed a drop at a time.
So, firmly, I'll stand.

I'll stand until my life is over,
I'll stand until the days are gone.
I'll stand until the sun turns black,
...I'll stand until He says, "Sit."
at the bottom of this deep, dark abyss.

The darkness fled,
my Savior bled.
I'll stand, I'll sit, I'll stay.
Moreover...
I'll obey.


I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break
~Lil OnE~



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Janie
Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 158

1 posted 2000-08-30 12:18 PM


I see a metaphor in this that we are dogs and He our master. How true and what a reminder showing us how humble we should really be!

Janie


Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-08-30 03:12 AM


Dear LilOne;
  Amen!! Good writing.  A good dose of humility is good for the soul and draws us closer, as we listen for His voice. Wonderful job.     Love, Marcy

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-08-31 09:28 PM


LilOne, that we should honor His name and obey his Word is how I read this. Enjoyable, and well done!
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2000-09-01 11:47 AM


Reaching the bottom means that we can finally stand, but even then it is best to obey.  Thank you for sharing and lets both try our best to stand as Christians...  God Bless You,  Bob <><
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-09-06 10:01 AM


Not only reaching that bottom, but hitting bottom. Once that happens, there's no other way to go but up!

Try as we might to obey, we all fail. We can only thank Him for his Grace! For His forgiveness!

I really like how this is open to so much interpretation  

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