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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2000-08-28 07:52 PM


Undone Heart

Almost finished, my undone heart
nearly complete, taking shape fast
only to be broken, by a tattered past

Smile and hide this broken heart
keep the pieces concealed
its only clay

Scattered pieces on the floor
nothing fits anymore

From the heavens you see
you know the real me
you put me back together
with love, grace and mercy

Finished heart, completly done


BloomingRose




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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-08-28 09:04 PM


Rose; This is so beautiful. I love your faith in this beautiful poem. That's what He does, puts us back together again, and you said it pefectly. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-09-01 10:29 PM


He is the ultimate Potter! I like how you've woven all this together.  

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Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus!

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