navwin » Archives » Spiritual Journeys » Let The Waters Pour
Spiritual Journeys
Post A Reply Post New Topic Let The Waters Pour Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-08-28 08:48 AM



Let the Waters Pour

Let the waters pour from heaven
Let the rivers overflow
Let the storm clouds slowly float
Across the meadows that I know

Shower me with pure fresh water
Cleanse my mind and soul of stain
Wash away dishonor’s blemish
Let me bathe in pristine rain

Let me feel the misty raindrops
Coming from my neighbor’s eyes
Sprinkle me with sweet compassion
So that I may soothe their cries

Make a lovely rainbow arc
Shine prism colors on their face
And iridescence on their hands
As You bestow Your Heavenly Grace

May I forever then be loving
Towards the others in distress
That I may shine Your prism colors
On the face of helplessness

Let the waters pour upon me
Drench me with your Heavenly Grace
From the deepest pools of reverence
May I humbly cleanse my face

Elizabeth Santos


© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
1 posted 2000-08-28 03:47 PM


beautiful and truly inspiring Elizabeth - I could fel the cleansing waters  


Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2000-08-28 04:36 PM


Hi Liz,

This is so beautiful, I pray that God does drench you in his heavenly aboundence, and ring loving tunes in your ears so that you know beyond a shadow of a daunt that he is with you in eveything you do, Liz this is simply beautiful very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2000-08-28 07:55 PM


Elizabeth
This so touched me

deb

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2000-08-29 02:44 PM


It is evident through your writing that it is more than a feeling, it is a work to be done and I am so greatful that you are so willing to share these precious waters of which you write with others...  God Bless You, Bob <><
Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
5 posted 2000-08-29 04:29 PM


Very beautifully written and a unselfish desire. Thank you, it is very inspiring. Marcy
Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
6 posted 2000-08-29 04:36 PM


You write so beautifully and this piece is such a refreshing prayer.

[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 08-29-2000).]

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
7 posted 2000-08-30 08:56 AM


Thank you all for your very kind remarks
Liz

BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
8 posted 2000-08-31 07:51 AM


Oh Liz, Such a lovely prayer.  These words you write are so full of loving inspiration.  Bonnie
juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
9 posted 2000-08-31 10:27 AM


Oh Liz, may you know His grace more everyday than the next. May you be covered in everything He is. This is stunningly beautiful my friend.
Juls

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Spiritual Journeys » Let The Waters Pour

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary